Can I have feedback on this poem please. Any ***constructive*** criticism will be appreciated!?

Ok I like the way you express after you say someone...but then you say ����HIS FINGERS����� if your talking about someone...then it could be man or female. Maby if you made it a little more bolder mabey use a HE in there...but I like how you expressed yourself especially the part "someone who loves me for who i am, because of everything I am.